Pitch Feedback.

I have taken into consideration the comments i have had back about my pitch, people said they like my idea of pastel colours with the black which is what i have also shown on my mock ups of my front cover,contents and double page spread although more colours need to be put in my double page spread. Also it was mentioned that a mix of creative fonts may look too disorganized however i have used three main ones on my mock of my front cover and i think that they go well with each other and suit the style of my magazine. I have used the font of the title to link to rest of the pages and used the same font for them titles as well , i think it was a good way to show a link and look sophisticated throughout my magazine.